Week #24 - Ryan

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  The jewellery was wanting to have a strike on Emma so they waited till Monday afternoon. The orange one spoke first and was complaining about how Emma's hair was getting in the way of his eyesight. The green bracelet shouted at Emma because she was getting dragged around every once and a while. The red necklace was unhappy at Emma because she never wore her. The right yellow earring had enough and went to another jewellery holder! But the left yellow earring was happy to stay with her, although she kept getting stuck in between her ear and her pillow.  


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  1. Unknown17 March 2021 at 20:14

    This is an intriguing use of the prompt Ryan. I would never have thought of using an anthropomorphic subject! (having human characteristics.
    "anthropomorphic bears and monkeys")
    I'm looking at your phrase ''once and a while,' we usually say once a while. See if you can remember to do this next time.
    Thanks for sharing,
    Jackie (Team 100WC)
    New Plymouth NZ

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