Week #43 - Noah

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Zoom! I raced so fast that when my car hit a bump it flew through the air. It seemed to take years but
I finally landed on the road. I knew I was speeding but I didn't care, I couldn't miss a second of the
action. Suddenly I saw blue and red lights in my peripheral vision. I went to pull over when I realised
I would be late for the game, so I sped off. The cop seeing I sped off chased after me. When I reached
the grounds, the cop told me you're under arrest, then it began...  

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  1. Mrs P26 July 2020 at 23:24

    Hi Noah
    Your 100WC has a really exciting pace which fits nicely with the content you are writing about. Using the prompt at the end gives a really lovely cliffhanger. Well done.
    Mrs P (Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand

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