Week #43 - Noah

-

Zoom! I raced so fast that when my car hit a bump it flew through the air. It seemed to take years but
I finally landed on the road. I knew I was speeding but I didn't care, I couldn't miss a second of the
action. Suddenly I saw blue and red lights in my peripheral vision. I went to pull over when I realised
I would be late for the game, so I sped off. The cop seeing I sped off chased after me. When I reached
the grounds, the cop told me you're under arrest, then it began...  

Comments

  1. Mrs P26 July 2020 at 23:24

    Hi Noah
    Your 100WC has a really exciting pace which fits nicely with the content you are writing about. Using the prompt at the end gives a really lovely cliffhanger. Well done.
    Mrs P (Team 100WC)
    Wellington, New Zealand

    ReplyDelete

Post a Comment

Popular posts from this blog

Week #24 (22) - Shaiza

-
  As I walked through the forest, winter's day covered the mountains plain white. As it got darker it had gone colder. (CRACK!) I turned around but there was no one, thinking in my mind that it was just a rabbit. The trees wooshed through the air. I heard a rustle behind one mysterious tree. Then out of nowhere a man jumped out behind the tree covered in moss like he had been standing there for years. I ran as fast as I could back home. But it was too late, because it was too dark to see my way back.\
Read more

Week #29 - Gian

-
It was Christmas Eve and my Dad said he wanted to have a new car for Christmas. We said it was impossible for Santa to give us that. Well, he still wrote it down on his gift list! He said he wanted a grey car with five seats. Later that night we heard a loud BANG on our roof. We checked it out but there was nothing. The next morning it was Christmas. After receiving our gifts my brother and I went outside to play on our scooters, and that’s when we saw it - a grey car, IN OUR ROOF!!
Read more

Week #43 - Tineke

-
Then it began… The lights turned on and I heard the audience cheering and chanting my name. I was frightened but I did not show my fear. I walked onto the stage with confidence not letting anything stop me from being brave. That night I performed the best performance ever. It had clear and beautiful moves with a voice that echoed through the town like a soft and delicate flute. My life had changed from that day on,  I became a famous actor and performed in lots of famous shows. So my words  are be strong and brave be you.
Read more