Week #29 - Lachie

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I looked out the window and saw in the neighbours roof was my Grandads car.  My Grandad was always a crazy driver. “Hello,” my Grandad said. “What are you doing?” I said.  My Grandad replied, “Just took a wrong turn”. Suddenly the police arrived and said that they would take away grandads licence because he was a reckless driver.  Did I mention that my neighbours are really mad? Grandad had the choice to fix the roof or pay for the damage. We decided for grandad to pay. It took up most of his money, so has to live with us.

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  1. Janet Team 100WC19 April 2020 at 13:51

    What an interesting story, Lachie. I love the way you let your characters talk and ask questions. It makes it all feel very real. I also like the neat conclusion to your story.

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