Monday, 11 May 2020

Week #33 - Lachie

The deafening screams echoed through the cold
night as dinosaurs battled ferociously.  Stomp!
Stomp! Stomp! was the noise of the T-Rex as he
made his way to the battlefield terrorising the
people and making them scream again.  Swish. 
That was the sound of the Pterodactyl swooping
down.  Bang! Crash!  A Triceptor charged at the
T-rex's leg.  Thump! As the T-rex fell to the ground. 
Swish! The Pterodactyl is swooping again.  Suddenly
a pack of Raptors jumped and roared.  The pack
of Raptors charged out and jumped towards us
and the screen went black.  The movie was over! 
What a movie.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Anna,
    An excellent story!
    So well-structured and with vivid details!
    Keep being creative and inspiring others to write!
    Best wishes,
    Miss Milena

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