Week #35 - Sophia

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"Hey stop it, stop it!" I cried. This strange creature was scratching my beautiful trunk. "Hey can you hear me?" I tried to ask, but no reply. You wouldn't imagine what happened next. This creature made a loud sound. It was annoying and weird. "Please can you stop it," I yelled. It must have not heard me because it was moving around scratching me and making a large sound like "woof?" "Argh STOP IT!!!!" I screamed. It didn’t budge. "AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!" I yelled. It still didn’t move. Finally it went back to this other creature. "Ah, all is calm, time for……………"

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